Draft Opening Analysis

This is our first draft of a nearly completed draft shoot, the quality of this production is not very high as, in my opinion, a lot of the first bit of filming could be redone to be better framed and better lit. Toms talent is easily seen towards the end where the shots are nicely framed and the lighting is a bit better, these shots have allowed me to edit them together with more fluidity and the shots look natural and go together well, the same cannot be said for the rest as the shots are too random and do not allow me to generate some sort of structure for the film.